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One day I was in the middle of a battlefield getting shot at then boom a big bomb went of right in front of me. Ahhhh I screamed Baam Baam Baam went my AK47 then my friend got shot right in front of me. Baam Baam Baam bullets were chasing me all over the place Ahhhhh.
I was running at the speed of light trip as I fell into a ditch Ahhhh smack I hit the floor. Then a dragon appeared Baaam Baaam Baaam I shot that dragon dead. Oh no he got back up again So I pulled out my shiny silvery sword and started to fight him, shiiing I stabbed him drop he was dead. Oh no he got back up again bang stab bang bang stab stab stab bang, finely I killed him.
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