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Yesterday it was my twin brothers birthday.
First our nana got here. She had brought us some wonderful sweet cram buns yummy. After that we had a drink of milk it tasted creamy. Then the boys went yas here comes the presents, They tered the wrapping of the box, ripped open the box and there was a big toy sub machine gun that she brought at chritmas and saved till now.
Then it was dinner time. For dinner we had soup. When it got given to us my nana took the first slurp then said mm mmm mmmmmm what a yummy soup, we all laghed. After that we had ice cream sundays with chopped banana chocolate sauce an wafers it was delicious.
Finnaly it was time for nana to go we all waved to her then she left.
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