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Jupiter facts.
Jupiter is located between Saturn and Mars. It is also the biggest planet. Jupiter travels around the sun once every 12 Earth years. This journey is called its Orbit The time it takes for the planet to travel round the sun is
is called a year.Jupiter has a rocky center, but the rest of the planet is made of hydrogen gas.
Jupiter's moons are Io, Europa, Callisto, Ganymede. Jupiter's moons are bigger than Earths moon. The most interesting moon is IO it is covered with volcanoes . It has more volcanoes than any other planet in the solar system. The surface of Io is always changing.
You are forgetting each paragraph needs to be about one thing. Come and see me and I will explain some more. Mrs Larsen
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