Monday, August 8, 2011

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On Saturday boom my dad had hit the hut with a stick it woke me up in a instant!! When I came out to see say something it was an arrow in the tree hut!! When mum came out the sounds that came out of her werePop crackle bang smack honk!!


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  1. Room 15 Carlton SchoolAugust 8, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    You have used lots of onomatopoeia's, but are they all meaningful?

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  2. AnonymousAugust 9, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    Great onomatopoeia's story I like it.

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  3. DarianAugust 10, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    That is a very descriptive story. Your mum sounded ANGRY!!! :1

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